Notes from the Judges Bench
Tonight saw a wonderful evening of talented youngsters performing in the annual St Eanswythe’s Talent show.
There were four of us called upon to ‘judge’ the show. This proved rather more difficult than any of us anticipated. A long list of 20 acts competed for the 3 prized rosettes and 3 commendations. The truth of the matter was that there were too many children worthy of the too few rosettes.
Ordinarily, with winners come losers too but there were no losers in tonight’s proceedings. Every child that competed showed courage and their own special talents, which made it such a privilege to watch and be a part of.
In my summing up, it was impossible to include all the children and all the acts, and to include the thoughts of my fellow judges. So here are our thoughts.
Tia
Lovely voice, with good pitch control. The upper range was particularly good. The movement was well done and well in time. You have a lovely presence on stage. Make sure the movement doesn’t interfere with the singing. Each time you sing the same words, find something different to say and keep your energy up and communicate with your audience. An excellent start!
Sare
What a refreshing smile! You sang charmingly and moved with grace across the stage. Don’t forget to really sell the song to us. Parts of the song were very low, project these as much as the higher parts. Try to communicate the meaning of the song more, even when the song is in a different language.
Abigail
Your voice and performance were well-focussed and you had good vibrato. You were nicely in tune. A little more energy throughout would have helped increase your presence on stage.
Danny, Joseph and Jay
Good presentations – excellent costumes! Be clear who does what and keep the pace going. An original idea and some comedy moments, intentional or otherwise!
Nyasha
A lovely voice although finding the pitch in this particular piece was quite difficult. Try to connect more with your audience and keep the energy level up. Some good use of expression in the words, more of this please! Be careful not to distract from your performance by fiddling with your skirt. You have personality in abundance, use it more!
Holly and Seliholm
A good entry onto the stage. Some lovely flexibility in the dance. More use of the space on the stage would have helped make the dance even better. Good attempts to dramatise the words and good co-ordination between to the two of you. Holly your stage presence was good. Seliholm, try to make eye contact with the audience, moving the dance further forward would have helped.
Zeena
What a gorgeous voice! especially in the upper reaches. You were always in tune. The movement could have been a bit more varied, side-to-side made us a bit dizzy! Try being a bit more expressive – your performance would be even more powerful. Excellent work!
Hayley
Your performance started a little shakily. Finding the starting note was hard in this song. You carried on and worked through it, without letting the audience know – well done! Be careful that you choose an appropriate move during the instrumental and make it seem like it grows out of the music rather than is an afterthought. Your vocals improved as the song went on but the song did not do your great voice justice today.
Alana
How brave you were to sing unaccompanied! And well done for carrying it off so well. You had a lovely way with you when you sang and your voice came over very well. Your presence on stage was good too. An unusual choice of song.
Adelaide – 1st Place
Lovely costume, and nice variety of dance moves, mixing various types of dance, including bangra, ballet and baton! Excellent use of smiling and keeping the audience involved. Some good use of the stage space. Lovely finish and a polished performance.
Greta
Good use of the stage. Good entry and interesting starting position. Be confident to keep in time to the music always and make sure you sell us the routine by looking up, at us and enjoying what you do all the time. Make sure you keep on the balls of your feet when you tap dance. Some lovely moments and what a lovely smile you have. Use it more!
Olivia
A confident and really tuneful rendition. I think that there is an amazing voice in there. You need to find your own style and sound which will be fantastic, judging by today’s singing. You could try moving a little more. You were very near to winning a prize. Well done!
Jackson, Daisy and Katie
This was a very impressive entry. You sang very well together, holding your pitch brilliantly. It was good fun, well danced and it put a smile on all our faces…especially the impromptu hula dancing, Jackson!!! Girls, you were extremely well co-ordinated. Again narrowly missed a prize!
Laura and Agnes – Well Done Rosette
Some really good singing. Laura, you connected with the text and the audience. Agnes, you have a lovely voice, project your personality. Your movements made us a little sea sick…try keeping still for a song like this. When you sing a duet, perhaps add in some harmonies or have some solos to add interest – a heartfelt rendition.
Molly –Well done Rosette
A well-learnt and well thought-out item. Excellent diction and attempt at dramatisation. We liked the use of the mask, but try to face the audience more. The characterisation of the 2 characters was a challenge that you rose to. A very interesting and imaginative item! Well done.
Hannah 3rd Place
Well done! What a lovely performance. You were charming and quietly confident. For the future, be careful not to make the bottom of the voice too heavy and work on the upper range and try to find your own style. This was excellent!
Holly and Jade
What wonderful voices! A shame you didn’t have 2 microphones! There was some expressive singing, but we wanted more connection to the words and audience. The solos gave me goose-bumps! Nearly a prize!
Nyama
Don’t forget to take off your shoes! Good costume, but don’t be distracted by it. Connect the moves more and keep eye contact as much as you can. Some really impressive moves, your smile is amazing!
Femke and Ruchia – 2nd Place
Wow! You wrote and recorded your own backing and co-ordinated a performance beautifully. That was impressive! Costumes were good and you clearly enjoyed what you did. You need to take the performance out to the audience and have more range of volume and expression to make what you do even more special. We were blown away!
Lucy, Brooklyn and Zara – Well Done Rosette
Good entry. Connect the moves you do, to create a seamless dance. You had great energy, but you need to maintain it throughout. We all loved the costumes and the moves. The audience participation was inspired!